Interesting . . .
For all the time you put into this I was expecting a bit more. The actual flash artistry and animation was a bit boring, but the conversations were well written, well planned. Sprites still don't do it for me. But the dialogue was impressive, it had emotion, personality, etc. I was expecting more, but hey, no one is perfect. I can see you put in some effort into this one. Nice Job. Good Effort.
Problems:
1) A little slow
2) The action is a bit repetative
3) Not much originality (magic, graphics, etc)
Fix those and everything should be a.o.k.
(Just because we don't like each other, doesn't mean I won't be fair with rating your movies)