Interesting . . .
For all the time you put into this I was expecting a bit more. The actual flash artistry and animation was a bit boring, but the conversations were well written, well planned. Sprites still don't do it for me. But the dialogue was impressive, it had emotion, personality, etc. I was expecting more, but hey, no one is perfect. I can see you put in some effort into this one. Nice Job. Good Effort.
1) A little slow
2) The action is a bit repetative
3) Not much originality (magic, graphics, etc)
Fix those and everything should be a.o.k.
(Just because we don't like each other, doesn't mean I won't be fair with rating your movies)
I loved this cartoon. It was stylish, it was funny, it was original. It's just a wonderful piece of art. Great Job! I'd love to see more of your work.
Krinkels, this was great
Wow, this is definitly one of the best flash movies I have ever seen in an extremely long time. It was so stylish, so funny, so creative. You are truly talented. Great Job. There are no words to describe how awesome of an animator you are and how great this was. This was great, phonomenal.
Wow, you really can live and breath . .
Your apart of the animation world. You are by far one of the most (or maybe THE most) talented artist on this site. You can just sense the emotion of the animation even without the sound. It doesn't need it. You are an extremely talented artist. Wow, I'm speachless. This was amazing. Who cares what everyone else thinks. This was an excellent animation and deserves more credit than it's getting. You, my friend, are an excellent artist. You are the future of animating. Excellent! Purely Excellent.
sorry to respond so late. but it makes it all worth the months of effort to know that i made something and people felt what i wanted to put into it. thank you
The message delivered in this short film was excellent. It was strait and true. Shows you that it isn't just Flashy animation that gets you famous. It's what it's all about. Excellent Flash, Excellent message. A great Flash. I loved it.
Not Bad. . . .
For your first flash that was pretty good. All the guys that have posted before me are idiots and don't know what they are talking about. It's your first flash for God's sake. Of course it's not going to be top notch but it was good. Good Effort. I expect better in the future though.
I couldn't find myself to bear through the whole hting (it moved too freakin slow). But the continuasly falling down people were funny. But make it a faster frame rate and do frame by frame animation and not tween. But funny nonetheless.
Umm. . .
That actually happened to my grandpa. Every day he walked around san francisco. They didn't know why he did it every morning. He was so old. But then one day he was hit by a car. . . . so this wasn't that funny. But I enjoyed it anyways. Good job!
Mario is fun to make fun of and kill and everything but it gets old once you've seen it by the same person on EVERY FREAKIN ENTRY!! But it was an ok movie, should've finished it tohugh.
THAT IS ONE OF THE BEST MOVIES ON NG!! I LOVED IT!! You are a very talented animator. This cartoon was just amazing. I tip my hat to you. Excellent work.
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